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7 _- W5 }4 u8 Q; V& I华人论坛,  股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer华人论坛,  股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer! J8 H7 n  \8 Y( }  S
是说像综漫那样的穿越吗?5 m4 l) f5 N, G/ x3 p# D; }
看过几篇就算喜欢前面,也会在后面容易跑出不舒服的苏味ORZ
4 U. V& z. ~( p1 x" i华人论坛,  股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer(我还蛮能接受圣母啊~苏的~但我不能接受一边骂别人苏.圣母,但一边自己全包了这样…….)
5 s& w. ~) o* l% c% c% N: bwww.chineseonboard.com话说,很多篇文原本应该都还可以算不错,就是拖太长,就变成垃圾了(这样说好毒!)
  W9 T+ |# q1 j) r华人论坛,  股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer话说我比记喜欢会先写好大纲走向.会打草稿的作者
+ i0 H3 J& c% z2 {华人论坛,  股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer通常他们没这么神展开><”(我觉得神展开跟创意绝对不同><)
9 t) m7 m/ S4 S3 F* e华人论坛& c# K2 M+ q0 Z! J( }
很多感觉上应该很威的女主都只会各种装
$ O) V+ p0 e* Q& M) o) N华人论坛,  股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer什么眼神啊~动作啊~表情啊之类的华人论坛,  股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer9 z/ x! L. H2 I( n
我都一边看一边想”直接打趴啊!!””走人了啊!!””说废话干嘛!!”
1 x% Y7 d  k7 Z, S4 v& a% A华人论坛,  股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer然后想着,八成是因为作者要凑字数=  =!!
, ~, }4 o7 O2 k  N' s/ i7 Z0 mwww.chineseonboard.com不觉得这些作者愈来愈会写废话了吗……
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